I dont want there to be much speaking in my trailer as I want people to physically see what happens and what could happen but I want to make sure that there are a couple of sentences in it.
These are all drafts and wont necessarily be in the trailer but it gives me an idea of what I could include,
"I've done no wrong".
"They deserved what they got".
"Nobody can understand".
I want these to be words that are softly spoken because she is a "loner" so they will be words that she will be speaking to herself and I think that they could work quite well because it makes people question if what she is doing is right.
I also want there to be some sort of saying that none of the characters will say it will just be ontop of the footage, here are a few possible
"An eye for an eye would make the whole world blind".
"As she has planted, so does she harvest; such is the field of karma."
the good things about this blog is the record of your thinking as each idea comes and you piecing ideas together
ReplyDeletebut... it is still VERY hesitant - now is the time to dive in; you may be about to encounter the unenviable session of agreeing a shooting schedule with me... so you have to be clear about the film content and the trailer' 5 sections